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Shubham Upman's avatar

Good job!! Despite the 250 words constraint, you pulled of a story, with a neat twist in the end!

I liked the sci-fi concepts of uploading memories to the cloud and illegal hackers, who could access it.

If you are interested you could build upon that idea. Would be great for an authoritarian regime, who has mandated citizens to upload their memories, into the cloud, if they want to live in the state. As you can imagine, such power into authorities' hand could turn into literal 'thought policing' — fascinating concept!

Erin Mar's avatar

Thank you!

Inga Jones Writes Thrillers's avatar

I love how much information and emotion you pack in such a short story. What was your experience with Midnight NYC like?

Erin Mar's avatar

Thanks, Inga! I have done several of their contests in the last few years and I always enjoy them. I probably learn the most from the beta groups.